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Xander
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PostSubject: Dalisa-Classed Energy Pistols *Weapon*   Wed Jun 15, 2011 12:27 pm

Owner:Xander Blastia

Name:Dalisa-Class Dual Energy Pistols

Primary Class:Gang Member

Secondary Class:Assassin

Type:Gun

Abilities: 1.)Short Period Opponent Stunning(30 Seconds/1 Posting Time)
2.)About 8% Damage In One Shot

Long/Short range:Long Range-Up To 45 Yards

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History:Xander's Adopted Father Dr.Clearwater, part time is a Scientist at Forsa Industries Working on New Projects and Such. During A Study He Realized A Chemical they made resembled Plasma, but was a Energy Saving Substance Which can be used for many things. To Help Enhance Police Security The Doctor Made a Prototype Of a Gun Model Which had a Holster To hold the substance when contained in a small Test tube. The Gun When Tested Was Proven To Work. But Some of the Bandits from The Wastelands Planned To Rob The Industries to Use The Guns for their own work. The Doctor alarmed Earlier Kept The Guns In Hiding but later decided to give them To Xander To Keep For Safety.


Last edited by Xander on Fri Jun 17, 2011 4:26 pm; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Dalisa-Classed Energy Pistols *Weapon*   Wed Jun 15, 2011 4:41 pm

looks good Xander but one two things i need you to look at and fix before approval 1) how long is the opponent stunned for? 1 post being minimum. 2) Serif Industries deals in human augmentations meaning they deal with replacement organs and limbs. i can see where your coming from just as long you you know that's what serif industries does. they don't deal in actual weapons
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PostSubject: Re: Dalisa-Classed Energy Pistols *Weapon*   Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:23 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dalisa-Classed Energy Pistols *Weapon*   Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:46 pm

still not quite what i was looking for. you need to think less about time and more about the posts. post wise i would say 1 post is how long the opponent stays stunned for. once you edit that i can approve this
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PostSubject: Re: Dalisa-Classed Energy Pistols *Weapon*   Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:00 pm

edits look good, thank you Xander. your gun is now
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